Client update

Today i emailed my client, Ms walker, enclosing my final version of my module. I informed her that the product was complete and asked her for precious feedback:

Dear Ms Walker,

I have made changes/amendments to the previous draft i sent you earlier - Japanese cartoon plane, new pictures, different fonts etc. Enclosed within the email is my final product, the one that will be submitted to the examiner. Thus, i will be greatly thankful if you could provide a detailed feedback on my module and please give comments on areas that you like and areas that could be improved. Please consider the specifications that were agreed on at the start of the project :

•   Include the following topics within “1900’s China”:  The Long March, The Invasion of Manchuria and The Cultural Revolution.
•  The age range for my product is for students at the age of 11- 13
• Engaging, informative, concise, creative and accurately reflect the syllabus for 1900's China
•  The product will allow people who have the most basic ICT knowledge to operate it. (They will only have to know how to operate a mouse) because it only consists of buttons and text to read. The product does not require the user to process adequate and apt ICT skills            

Ideally, could you please complete the feedback asap (before the due date of 12th March). Sorry about the late notice. Thank you very much for your time, as this feedback is crucial for my evaluation which i need for a good grade. 

Thank you, Chris Xia            

The feedback from her will be crucial to me as it will help me write my evaluation and also help me understand my project from her point of view. Hopefully my module has solved her "problem". I will also go see her tomorrow to discuss the finer points of the feedback with her.