Wednesday, December 19, 2012

Handing in for feedback

As i have completed my first draft, i have sent an email to my client, Ms Walker with the flash file enclosed within:
Dear Ms Walker,

I have enclosed my project (Module on 1900's China) as a Flash File, which can be opened using a Flash player or using your web browser. This module is only around two/thirds completed and i will be adding parts and refining sections based on your fundamental suggestions/feedback. Thus, there might be some problems within the module that haven't been dealt with. 

Please open the module, try out everything and give me feedback on the following:
·  If the quizzes have correct answers and suitable difficulty.
·  If the information pages give appropriate information on the topic.
·  Are the questions and information related to the syllabus ?
·  Anything you don't like and want to be removed or altered.
·  Anything that you would like included inside the module that is feasible.
·  Do all the buttons work and link to the correct pages. 
 Please note that the bar at the bottom is due the the fact that i used a program called iSpring Flash Converter to convert my project into a flash file, unfortunately the school only has the free version, thus the advertisement bar at the bottom. Your feedback will help me enhance and improve my project and will be greatly appreciated. 

Thank you, and i apologize for spending your precious time.

Your Sincerely, 

Chris Xia.

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